Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Magical Moment 48, "A Rain Haiku"

Wet, dark came the rain.
Just when I thought it would cease,
The rain starts again.

Tears fall. Hope fading.
There! The sun through angry clouds.
The trick is waiting!

2 comments:

Eddie said...

I've read this dozens of times today, and I really think it is beautiful. I looked up the definition of haiku and this is it. Nature, emotion, transition, kigo, and kire. This has it all. Every time I read this I like it more.

Debbie said...

Wow!