Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Magical Moment 48, "A Rain Haiku"

Wet, dark came the rain.
Just when I thought it would cease,
The rain starts again.

Tears fall. Hope fading.
There! The sun through angry clouds.
The trick is waiting!


Eddie said...

I've read this dozens of times today, and I really think it is beautiful. I looked up the definition of haiku and this is it. Nature, emotion, transition, kigo, and kire. This has it all. Every time I read this I like it more.

Debbie said...